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Name: Joe Country: Burkina Faso Gender: Male
Interests: I enjoy Rocket Propelled Grenades, Video Games, reading fantasy, and hanging with my friends. I also write and draw, but i'm not so good at the drawing part! Expertise: um, let me think about that.
Procrastination! I do that a lot. I'm probably doing in right now!
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10/27/2005
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| Every one check out my comment on daniel's story (Little red riding hood)!!!!!!!  | | |
| Prologue:
Sephara rose, and combed her long, golden hair as she fluttered through the air. Her silver, bat-like wings beat the air as she searched for Kindar. She was a guardian, as was he, sentinels protecting the temple of the elements. But that was the extent of what they had in common. Kindar was the troublemaker, and Sephara was constantly suffering his practical jokes. Or at least, she thought they were his. Lately, she had been his only target; none of the others had been bothered for months. And the pranks were getting more and more dangerous each time.
From his behavior earlier in the day, Sephara was sure he was up to something, and didn’t care to fall victim to another of his tricks. She hoped to catch him working on his prank, so she could finally know for sure it was him who had nearly killed her only a few days ago.
She drifted through the hallways, deeper into the temple, when she saw a quick flash of flame dart past her. “Kindar!” She broke cover and ran after, determined to catch him. His cackling laughter drifted through the ancient, musty hallways, and then stopped abruptly. Sephara paused, wondering what could have happened. In horror she remembered the other disappearances, and the mysterious deaths of the orcs. It was as if a black shadow had been cast over her. She could not see nor hear anything. She was filled with doubt, paralyzed by fear.
Gradually her sense of calm returned. “Nothing happened, this is just part of Kindar’s trick, he wants to lure me through the hallway”. Well, if she was going to find him, she had better go carefully, or she would risk getting burned or covered in rubble like last time. She could feel her legs again, and began to walk forwards, glancing about for any signs of traps. She saw none, but as she neared the end of the dark hall, she heard Kindar’s voice, but timid and full of fear, not his usual demeanor at all. “Sephara? Are you there? Please, help me.” She paused, unsure. What if something really had happened to Kindar? Should she go get help? If she did, she might be to late to help him. But what if she was hurt? Then no one would know of their plight. No. She had to help him, there was no time.
Sephara edged along the wall and peered around the corner, dreading what she might see. “Sephara?” She heard it clearly this time, no more than ten feet ahead of her. She rushed along the corridor, and the stopped, gasping. She was at a dead end, and there lying on the floor, was Kindar. She stood rooted to the spot, staring dumbly at his limp form lying in the dim light. She couldn’t understand, she couldn’t think, all she could see was Kindar. “How? Why? Too late. I couldn’t help him. Dead. I failed.” Then she heard Kindar’s laughter, cold and malicious, directly behind her...
What is the scariest thing that the creature which has killed Kindar and imitated his voice could say? any suggestions? PLEASE! ALL COMMENTS ARE APPRECIATED! EVEN BEGGED FOR!
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| Allright, here's some more on the story. Ideas thus far:
- Party will consist of reclusive Druid, (nature wizard) A paladin (knight of sorts) who kills anything evil on sight, and a goofy wizard who uses Fireball for everything. Right now i am using the original names: Silvara, Korillian, and Drakan, but am considering Sturm for the paladin and Fizban for the wizard (obscure dragonlance reference) if you have any name suggestions, let me know.
- Party will hear of ruins in mountains and go to investigate. The book will open with tham at the ruins, ans there will be acouple flashbacks telling how they came to be there.
- The story is that long ago there was a great temple tho the masters of the elements. at its center was the "Sacred Flame" and no one but the high priest knew what it was. The temple was guarded by 'The guardians', minor elementals called mephits. Long ago, the first high priest had summoned them for a thousand years. On the last year before the guardians could return home, the temple was raided by orcs. Rather than protect it, the guardians fled in fear, and the priests were butchered. On his dying breath, the high priest cursed the guardians to remain in the temple until they had rid it of evil altogether. centuries passed, and one day, the orcs died out of a mysterious cause. Though the orcs were gone, the guardians still sensed evil, in fact, more so than before. They spent years searching for the evil, but never found it. The adventurers arrive at the temple, where the guardians ask for their help in vanquishing the mysterious evil. their reward, the sacred flame.
- The adventurers must voyage through the temple, searching for four tokens which will unlock the saacred flame. The temple is divided into four sections, one for each element, and there is a token for each section. Only with all four will they be able to retrieve the sacred flame and defeat the ancient EVIL!
- The guardians reveal that some of their number has dissapeared in recent moths, and they fear they have been killed, or worse.
- The air guardian, who I think to call Sephara, is the resposible one. The Fire Guardian is called Kindar, and is always pulling pranks on the others. The Dust Guardian is always deppressed, like Marvin. The Water and earth guardians are mute. Ice is vain and ditsy.
- I would like a title too!
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| Hey Guys! Coolness! I have decided to write a book/ D&D adventure! it is awesomeness! WOW! A LOT of exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah. from now on, i will refrain from exclamation points. But really, its cool. I will be posting about it from time, and i would like EVERYONE to comment, give suggestions, and occasionally write some paragraphs for consideration.
Please!!!!!!!
Thanks.]
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| Yay i have a minute of free time!
I have been accepted into three schoools now, and probably three others. But unless I get scholarships, We wont be able to afford 30,000 a year. So yeah, Im working on an application essay now, and when i finish, ill work on my science fair project. Joy. 
yeah, thats my life. 
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